Ambition By Ace

Ambitious is what I am..... to be They all are gonna love me for that>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I think!

If I were to tell you it was in my blood

perhaps you'll drain it,after stabbing me in the vein.

If i were to tell you how passionate I am,

You'll mistaken it for desperateness.

Ambition would never change,unless

you choose a different reason to create one.

Ambition is your vein,in your soul,in what ever 

motivation you have or ever had.

 Think Arsenal.

My ambition is self inflicted wounds,that

lives in between my eyes,that speaks to my

thoughts and displays the idea.

My ambition is my motivation,my institution.

Would it change,

I doubt it will ever change,

but my ambition lives in spirit,so when I'm gone

and you read these poems of mine, you realize

my ambition was me.

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

The last part hits you =)

The first four lines were great too, and very truly spoken!

Although I would like to make some suggestions: highlighting makes it a little hard to read. And you don't really have to write your name in the title. Just saying :)

[Coyote Poetry]

"but my ambition lives in spirit,so when I'm gone
and you read these poems of mind, you realize
my ambition was me."
I like the way you made your point. Nice flow of thoughts and i like the strong ending. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Rosalind Gale]

I do like your style - and you have the goods, and the balls, to do it your way. Keep on keeping on -

Rosa -x-

[marytownsend]

Powerful poem with good flow of thoughts! Really like the last line!

[Virtuosa X]

Great Job there. Ambition is a lot when you look at what motivates you, and it doesn't change unless you want it to.
Nice work. (In the second to last line, I think you meant poems of mine,not mind)