drowning

drowning

A Poem by Anxelin

clutching for gasps 
of fresh air oh so sweet 
drowning in water 
dark and too deep 
reaching the surface 
she breathes her last breath 
reaching and tired 
she falls in it's depths

hands pulling her upward 
away from her tomb 
redrowning please save me 
she cries for it's doom 
"end me already 
it won't take that much 
kill me please darling 
I'm tired of this 
the storm will not end now 
it never gives up 
it won't ever be happy 
until death do I touch"

grasping her arms though 
he lets her fall in 
silently drowning 
she begins to slip then 
pulling her upwards 
again here she goes 
killing her slowly 
quietly, cold

© 2010 Anxelin


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wow. really vivid work here. nice poem i think

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