colorful flames

colorful flames

A Poem by Anxelin
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inspired by candlelight

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rainbows in the light of a flame
shining bright beautifully; untame
rays of color striking eyes
illuminating depths fine and wise
warm air with ribbons from palletes
piercing heat that chimes away
wrapping time; life's show of lights
unblind colors shown in black and white

© 2010 Anxelin


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i like black n white
and ur title makes me smile

Posted 8 Years Ago


Yeah the rhyme and rhythm is awesome. Vibrant, beautiful, colorful, strong.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The rhyme & rythm is really good. I enjoyed it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very vibrant and colorful

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on January 31, 2010
Last Updated on February 3, 2010
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Anxelin
Anxelin

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