road to hell

road to hell

A Poem by Anxelin


walking towards the distance
a ghost hangs in the sky
orange and bright like fire
lights from a firefly
shadows above dark clouds
desert whisks within the shade
hiding every footstep here
the softness which death gave
a hell is where she's going
a hell is where she'll be
reaching the steps of heavens doors
she'll fall to beasts instead

© 2010 Anxelin

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The way of this world. Most of us are going to hell anyway. I like this poem. Powerful statements leading to a very good ending. A excellent poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago

I loved this. The images it created in my mind were magnificent. Your talented!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Nice one...i had to read it twice, since i liked it so much :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

Loved it Anx. My favorite. You're so talented Jess!
I love you! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

This is crazy good. You created this subtle buildup to the subject falling to hell. Good job

Posted 12 Years Ago

Beautiful rythym, and clear imagery

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on February 2, 2010
Last Updated on February 3, 2010



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