road to hell

hellbound

walking towards the distance
a ghost hangs in the sky
orange and bright like fire
lights from a firefly
shadows above dark clouds
desert whisks within the shade
hiding every footstep here
the softness which death gave
a hell is where she's going
a hell is where she'll be
reaching the steps of heavens doors
she'll fall to beasts instead

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The way of this world. Most of us are going to hell anyway. I like this poem. Powerful statements leading to a very good ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Anonymous]

I loved this. The images it created in my mind were magnificent. Your talented!

[Blue tailed kite]

Nice one...i had to read it twice, since i liked it so much :)

[The Old Ashes]

Loved it Anx. My favorite. You're so talented Jess!
I love you! :)

[Huggy Bear]

This is crazy good. You created this subtle buildup to the subject falling to hell. Good job

[Kyle]

Beautiful rythym, and clear imagery