Oh skies- Beautiful portrayer

Oh skies- Beautiful portrayer

A Poem by anxia
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wrote this poem on a beautiful brightly clouded noon.Hope you all understand, how i relate myself with the skies of different seasons.Thank you.

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Oh Skies ,bright and elegant;
how thou instill serenity and hope in this quivered mind.
Lined by infinity,smothered with delightful moods,
thou stand high,
drawing a path to effervescence.

Oh Skies disquiet and dread,
lighting and thundering,
down pouring, letting it flow from your bosom.

Oh Skies mystic and ecstatic,
opulent with perspicacity:
shining with the shine conceived through every season that thou passeth

Oh Skies of wonders, how thou portray this soul so absolute!!

Oh Skies painted with a tint of pink thither,
smeared with orange hither,brushed with red far and wide;
how beautifully thou recapture the memories.

© 2012 anxia


Author's Note

anxia
Ignore not anything,i pleadeth!

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i am always struck by the way a look at the sky calms down my frayed nerves .. brilliantly portrayed i must say ! it was a joy to read this !!

Posted 11 Years Ago


anxia

11 Years Ago

Ikr?
Aww thank you so much for your lovely comment, the_stoic!! I am glad you liked it.
I love how it's written
Keep it up!

Posted 11 Years Ago


anxia

11 Years Ago

Thanks Rhi :)
Rhianne Ney

11 Years Ago

You're welcome
indeedeth! I can hear this one being read with vigour, well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


anxia

11 Years Ago

Thank you,Sheema:)
great job love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


anxia

11 Years Ago

Thank you,Brianna :).
written in the old language, I adore this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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anxia

11 Years Ago

AW thank you so much,Neva.I am so happy that you adore it:).Thank you so much for your adorable revi.. read more
Nice poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


anxia

11 Years Ago

Thank you,Sami.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Quite welcome
What powerful imagery in this poem: the last stanza is my favourite!
Such colourful images come to mind with each description, and it's true, the skies are ever changing. Had to look up perspicacity :)
Enjoyed this poem the most of ones posted thus far.
Thank you for sharing
Lizbeth


Posted 11 Years Ago


anxia

11 Years Ago

Aw Liz,i am glad you liked it that much!!Thank you for you awesome review.And its my pleasure :)
Lizbeth

11 Years Ago

My pleasure ...
We're having a strange spectrum of colours here every single day!
Kee.. read more
Breatifully done! Nice write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


anxia

11 Years Ago

Thank you,Elleen.
:)
I think you should write for your joy; so others can enjoy what you write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jai Garg

11 Years Ago

Maybe in time you will become conscious of why I commented like this; got to look within you lol.

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Added on July 28, 2012
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