Oh skies- Beautiful portrayer

Oh skies- Beautiful portrayer

A Poem by anxia
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wrote this poem on a beautiful brightly clouded noon.Hope you all understand, how i relate myself with the skies of different seasons.Thank you.

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Oh Skies ,bright and elegant;
how thou instill serenity and hope in this quivered mind.
Lined by infinity,smothered with delightful moods,
thou stand high,
drawing a path to effervescence.

Oh Skies disquiet and dread,
lighting and thundering,
down pouring, letting it flow from your bosom.

Oh Skies mystic and ecstatic,
opulent with perspicacity:
shining with the shine conceived through every season that thou passeth

Oh Skies of wonders, how thou portray this soul so absolute!!

Oh Skies painted with a tint of pink thither,
smeared with orange hither,brushed with red far and wide;
how beautifully thou recapture the memories.

© 2012 anxia


Author's Note

anxia
Ignore not anything,i pleadeth!

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i am always struck by the way a look at the sky calms down my frayed nerves .. brilliantly portrayed i must say ! it was a joy to read this !!

Posted 8 Years Ago


anxia

8 Years Ago

Ikr?
Aww thank you so much for your lovely comment, the_stoic!! I am glad you liked it.
I love how it's written
Keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago


anxia

8 Years Ago

Thanks Rhi :)
Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

You're welcome
indeedeth! I can hear this one being read with vigour, well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


anxia

8 Years Ago

Thank you,Sheema:)
great job love.

Posted 8 Years Ago


anxia

8 Years Ago

Thank you,Brianna :).
written in the old language, I adore this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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anxia

8 Years Ago

AW thank you so much,Neva.I am so happy that you adore it:).Thank you so much for your adorable revi.. read more
Nice poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


anxia

8 Years Ago

Thank you,Sami.
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

Quite welcome
What powerful imagery in this poem: the last stanza is my favourite!
Such colourful images come to mind with each description, and it's true, the skies are ever changing. Had to look up perspicacity :)
Enjoyed this poem the most of ones posted thus far.
Thank you for sharing
Lizbeth


Posted 8 Years Ago


anxia

8 Years Ago

Aw Liz,i am glad you liked it that much!!Thank you for you awesome review.And its my pleasure :)
Lizbeth

8 Years Ago

My pleasure ...
We're having a strange spectrum of colours here every single day!
Kee.. read more
Breatifully done! Nice write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


anxia

8 Years Ago

Thank you,Elleen.
:)
I think you should write for your joy; so others can enjoy what you write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jai Garg

8 Years Ago

Maybe in time you will become conscious of why I commented like this; got to look within you lol.

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