Me

Me

A Poem by anxia
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This is a piece i have written after a very long time.This, i have been feeling since forever but was able to write down today.I don't think my writing has done justice to my feelings yet....

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A soulful melody playing from a distance,
the adopting skies, calm milieu;
roil my heart bringing a conflate of memories to life,
there's something beautiful, something haunting,something cathartic.

The troubled tides demur to hush,
a numinous sense that i pine for,
something rendering me breathless,
something unexpressable, something unexplainable,
a past into which  i yearn to mire, out of which i wish to charge out,
pleasurable yet poignant.

A state where i ponder what all i have come to be, 
what all i have done through those precious times
Of what i have come to be,
From a restless feel to numbness,
i enter in to the present,
live with it till such a gale visits me yet again.

© 2016 anxia


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anxia
One thing i ask of you is your honesty:)

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misty and ephemeral

Posted 8 Years Ago


i like this, makes perfect sense & quite intriguing : )

Posted 8 Years Ago


anxia

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Soul drifter! Glad you like it :)
I like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


anxia

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
"something unexpressable, something unexplainable,
a condition where into i yearn to mire where i wish to charge out of,
pleasurable yet poignant."

isn't this what life is ... painful yet beautiful ..
i like !!

Posted 8 Years Ago


anxia

8 Years Ago

Thanks. Glad you did :)
Hamza

8 Years Ago

:)
i like your word choice here, a lot, and i love the description :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


anxia

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your supportive review, Rhea :)
the last two lines is so true... and with each word i could feel the restlessness which i too feel sometimes ... thums up

Posted 8 Years Ago


anxia

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much,Sudeshna!!!Glad you could relate to me:)
The troubled tides demur to hush,
a numinous sense that i pine for;
something rendering me breathless,
something unexpressable, something unexplainable,
a condition where into i yearn to mire where i wish to charge out of,
pleasurable yet poignant.

A state when i ponder what all that i have come to be,
what all that i have done through those precious times,
what i would come to be.
From a restless feel to numbness i enter in to the present,
live with it till such a gale visits me yet again.
I love this lines
Very expressive

Keep writing ;D

Posted 8 Years Ago


anxia

8 Years Ago

Thank you,Rhi.
Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

You're welcome ;D
"there's something beautiful, something haunting,something cathartic."

that explains exactly what this poem is, very nice!

Posted 8 Years Ago


anxia

8 Years Ago

Exactly!Glad you got the picture and thank you so much :)
This is an excellent poem of self exploration. You are brave enough to show your vulnerability, hope for the future and the fact that you still remain uncertain of what that will be. Great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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