You Who Made me ME

Forced into a box so small

Wondering why at all

I am cramped and aching

I am here for the taking

My name has been spit upon

And I let it be

For you who have made me ME

Have made me the worst of your possiblities

I am not crud

I am a human being

Just

       Like

             You!

And I only as that you let me out of this box

So I can soil your name too

 

Reviews

[Ben Taylor]

"And I only as that you let me out of this box"
I assume the "as" is "ask"?

I liked this. Also, your stair-step of words near the end was a nice touch :)
The beginning rhymed but then it kinda just..stopped lol.

[typingaway]

Wow, so simple yet so effective, great work!