Why

Why

A Poem by LittleBigDreams
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What I've seen people go through

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Why did you hurt me
Why did you lie
You made me melancholy
Why'd you make me cry

Why'd you pretend
It just brought on more pain
This is it my friend
Now you'll see my reign

© 2018 LittleBigDreams


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LittleBigDreams
I hope you like it

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Oh i liked it. just well...sad. I imagine that the character is banging on the other side of a glass window crying, screaming out these words as her face slowly drains of color. To put an image like that in my head you must have real power. Its one thing for an other to tell you these things but you showed me this image through your words

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LittleBigDreams

6 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate it.



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Oh i liked it. just well...sad. I imagine that the character is banging on the other side of a glass window crying, screaming out these words as her face slowly drains of color. To put an image like that in my head you must have real power. Its one thing for an other to tell you these things but you showed me this image through your words

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LittleBigDreams

6 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate it.

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Added on April 12, 2018
Last Updated on April 12, 2018
Tags: Why sad, upset

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LittleBigDreams
LittleBigDreams

Kingsville, TX



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