Jaded

Jaded

A Poem by Aprille
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October 01, 2016

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Can you imagine
Floating between air and water
Maybe you can't
I hope you can
Because I'm letting go
And I will end up drowning

© 2016 Aprille


Author's Note

Aprille
Just one of my few random thoughts...

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A thought indeed.

Caught between two places leading to a sense of exhaustion and resignation. Hold ourselves up between the layers or just let go and drift to the bottom?

Short, but interesting.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Aprille

2 Years Ago

Thank you. It's been three months, still jaded, still floating.
that's so cool!!! and so jaded ;) ... love the places of in between!
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Aprille

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for appreciation. :)
Enjoyed looking at this, clever, emotional idea, well put together.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Aprille

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
lol,i have been jaded all day,great write

Posted 2 Years Ago


Aprille

2 Years Ago

thank you. :)
which is something i think of sometimes...when we get jaded, we expect the worst...

we could rise...but instead we drown...ever wake up with that feeling of drowning...just below the surface, just can't quite reach it, but it is so close.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Aprille

2 Years Ago

I'm a bit late though but thank you, thank you so much. Wrote that poem last year,still feels the sa.. read more

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