PLEA FOR PEACE

PLEA FOR PEACE

 

P  Pursuing an elevated state of consciousness by

L  Leaving behind ancient transgressions and

E  Entering a new era of compassion.

A  Allowing peace to overcome Palesrael.

 

F  For an eternity extending but sixty years,

O  Over the “Holy Land”

R  Restlessness and strife radiated like cancer.

 

P  People have grown weary of aggression and hate.

E  Everybody prefers love, peace

A  And companionship

C  Centered upon the twin dreams of

E  Equality and dignity for all.

 

 

Reviews

[Marie]

What, no anagram? LOL. Great piece. Makes you stop and think.

[Red_Queen]

Great job. As most people know on here these are some of my favorite types of poems.

[Emily B]

I like the acrostic. You write those very well. So well you wouldn't even know it was acrostic if you didn't look closely.

[SweetPeachesAlways]

I like the Peace paragraph best of all...Good write.

[Legion]

Great work here. More people need to read it. Love the "Palesrael" name. Kudos. Keep up the good fight!

[J. Hampton]

" Paleisrael"....Love that

Peace....
Well in regard to the middle east...the constant unrest ...it will not end
Some peolpes' brand of harmony ...includes removing all others who do not do as they do .

Peace comes from allowing God in your heart...... to change you.
Not killing your " enemy" supposed...or canging them.

Blesssssssssssss

[mattavelli]

This is great. The Europeans have retaken Jerusalem. Now, when I say go, everyone kill each other.

[Monners]

This is nice. I like the arrangement of letters with words. The message is needed to be heard and you speak of it so well. =) Thank you for sharing this.

[Robert Luna]

Everyone dreams of heaven but don't want to pay the price to get there. I liked this piece and I always like when people write these types of writings. Being moving and artistic all together at one time. You have once again written a thought provoking piece of work. True inspiring job here.


Well Done!!!!!