OIL COLONY

OIL COLONY

A Poem by The Archangel Gabriel
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What are we doing in Iraq? What aren't we doing in Iraq? Was a new oil colony really worth the loss of life and the loss of over one trillion greenbacks?

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OIL COLONY

 

O  Organic, unctuous residues

I  Induce waves of neoteric colonization.

L  Looters infest Mesopotamia!

 

C  Corporate greed

O  Observes no inhibition.

L  Leasehold estates were negotiated with

O  Only payment of pennies.

N  No alternate grounds explain

Y  Years of painful war.

© 2008 The Archangel Gabriel


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You know, I love acrostics. The things one can come up with using the letters of another word or phrase are absolutely amazing. This acrostic is very powerful. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

profound Acrostic write ~ very Well DonE!~Fran

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ahha! Nicely done! These are issues close to my heart. It doesn't make sence to me and I guess it isn't supposed to. It is like the poor children in the gold mines that make pennies and live basically as slaves. Makes no sense when people pay good money for gold.
You know the big oil companies just announced thier biggest profit margin ever last quarter. Explain that one. It didn't cost them any more to produce it and it's all done on percentages. The higher the price, the higher the profit. Plus the fact that the oil we are using today was probably purchased 2 years ago.
Love All,
Mejasha


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Corporate greed...
NO WAY! (sarcasm)

Very good subtle rant!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gave this a read...as you used the term in a review...I thought you were being sarcastic ( my apologies)

Good write...

Capitalisim at its worst...
Colinization has wrecked havoc on so many cultures...economies across the world...due to our...eh...."Benevolance "

Blessssssssssss

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

haha, you nailed it. :)
Great write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow! Great write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bravo! Let 'em have it. Corporate b******s.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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