It Won't Work

It Won't Work

A Poem by arvin

I was just emotional when i wrote this few months ago.


When I first saw you

I felt an unusual beat in my heart

A new feeling haven’t felt before

I then knew that I would love you


When we first met

We were both strangers to each other

Knowing nothing about each other

We were both innocent whom we were facing


Time was very considerate

We were introduced to each other

Knew each other’s name in a short while

We then started to be friends


We were together most of the times

Sharing things about ourselves

Tackling several agendas about our lives

Happily spending time together


We’re together each day

We’re together most of the times

Why can’t I fall in love with you?

There’s no reason I cannot


I enjoy your company

I hope you’re enjoying mine too

I miss you when we’re apart

Hope you’re missing me too


I now love you too much

It feels like heaven every time I see you smile

I feel like melting whenever you stare at me

I don’t know what I will feel whenever I’m with you


But this kind of love couldn’t stand long

This love couldn’t survive

This love just won’t work

This love is just not possible

© 2013 arvin

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I once felt this way about someone, this definitely talked to me.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Ooh. The line: "Time was very considerate" is lovely.

Posted 7 Years Ago


7 Years Ago

thank you:)

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Added on March 14, 2013
Last Updated on March 14, 2013



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