Please let me, even once, just this once...

Please let me, even once, just this once...

A Poem by arvin

Please let me tell you this
even once
just this once...
cause this feeling i couldn't anymore take
i couldn't take it anymore

Please lend me your ears
even once just this once...
i've long to tell you this
a feeling i hid for a long time

Please let me say this words
just these simple words
simple words that's worth meaningful
please hear my plea

Please let me whisper
" I LOVE YOU "
though you ignore it
i just wanna express
this feeling i couldn't anymore take..
for this I LOVE YOU!
is treasured and meant to be for you..

© 2015 arvin


Author's Note

arvin
im not so sure about the grammar

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i like it

you might want an exclamation mark after i love you

but otherwise really good

Posted 8 Years Ago


nice arvx!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 18, 2011
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