Your Dream's Desire

This woman whose beauty would make God weep

The light of my world

Rebecca

I would give to you my smile

that sauntered look and walk

A long mellow daydreamed breeze

that cute look each time we talk

 

I would give to you the sunshine

a kind windy sun flowered field

Hopes to fill your hearts desire

with any dream your mind could

 wield

 

I would give to you the warm rain

sweet songs the whippoorwills sing

The eternal stars of the night

for you I would give everything

 

Author's Note

It is always the inner hope striven for throughout our lives that at one time our dreams will intersect with our reality. Such has been my own experience these last 4 years. A life spent alongside the one you love gives the meaning and purpose so sought for and desired. Happy Anniversary Becky!
Tate

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Tate,

I have been reading your poetry for years. I have listened to the music that you've included with the poetry. I alway turn that off because I want to hear the true you without coloration. I want to hear the words. This piece was different. The music fit. It was an extension. The words were pure. I think this is your finest poem. I have read the poems about your son, and that emotion is so pure. I have read poems about your experiences, again always so pure. But here I see your heart, My Friend. It is so inescapable. You can't hide here, not even a little piece of you. It's all out there. Here is your consuming love. I read this and dropped my head because I am so glad that you have such an all-consuming love. Give your Lady a kiss from me. She is special and has won undying love from a romantic soul. I hope she appreciates the treasure. I suspect that she does, and she does have those penetrating blue eyes.

Greatest respect, and the highest marks!

A devoted Friend,

Rick

[Tate Morgan]

This may be the greatest review i ever received. I read it and in so doing was bestowed the greatest feeling of appreciation and honor. I thank you I am truly humbled
Your friend
Tate

[Rick Puetter]

Very simple, Tate! You are welcome, and I was honored to read such a pure and untarnished poem. A truly fine work.

[Pax]

a great introduction to the light of your world mr. Tate... a heartfelt write.... full of thankfulness, thoughtfulness, hopefulness, loveliness, and every light that she shines bright...

this is such a brilliant tribute and dedication to the one person who touched your soul...
a very romantic write!

[Dayran]

Your poem introduced Rebecca to us, her moods, walk, her voice and the way she makes you feel. It would be nice to know also how that may have put your heart's desires to dream.

[Tomás Ó C..]

Love it. By the way, the article you sent will be up on http://www.cartyspoetryjournal.com in the morning, am doing the ezine as a HTML first and then a PDF, to have the best of both worlds...

[Talal Hussain]

Very personal and very touching...thank you for this writing:-)