The Secret

The Secret

A Poem by Tate Morgan
"

A Dream

"

Lucy Hamilton Princess of the Emerald Isle.

 

 

I dreamed three words within my mind

that longed to touch her heart
Each a third of the love
I had felt for her from the start

I'd hid these words I'd treasured so
praying they would only heed
But needing love they wanted out
to touch the soul they'd freed

So now at last I let them fly
as all would freely do
That she might know the first be I
the others Love and You


Tate


                     

© 2018 Tate Morgan


Author's Note

Tate Morgan
The answer to all who seek it. The eternal valentine !!

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This was stunning! I saw so much in you piece that I felt as if i were reading one of my own. To hide behind ourselves, as I know many of us do, including I! Then to suddenly feel that freedom to come forth and speak of what is in our hearts is a feeling of re-birth. Like being a child again and finding their first joy in life and running with it.. That's what I saw in your piece. The feelings of 'at last I am free'


Fantastic!


Magdelena xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Tender words for the Princess of the Emerald Isle. A touch of romance for the eternal valentine. Nicely written Tate. All good wishes.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tate Morgan

1 Year Ago

Thank you Christine I’m off working tonight sorry I can’t stay
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Year Ago

Hope you are OK. Happy working:)
yearned to know what word could it be, what promises did you make and it turned out to be so simple, yet so damn effective. Loved it!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tate Morgan

1 Year Ago

Thank you Sharma the simplest words are always best
another poem awarded .... nice job Tate ...
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tate Morgan

1 Year Ago

Thank you Gene as always I am forever in your debt
Such a very beautiful write & touching, love that song.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tate Morgan

1 Year Ago

Thank you brandie I try to use simple language in complex ways
thanks for entering this into my competition, beautiful

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tate Morgan

1 Year Ago

Thank you Julie
Very sweet three words. I love the way the words would not stay hidden, and you had to heed their wish and let them fly to your love.


Posted 1 Year Ago


Tate Morgan

1 Year Ago

Thank you astri she was once an obsession of mine
"The Secret"
Tate Morgan,
A secret is mentioned in above poem which is part of the mystery of the three threaded theme of a special gift of love. It felt like an expression of a very large promise to another one freed from a kind of bondage. A promise given to be and share and be available; different for the future than the past.
I love to analyze and ponder so this one was perfect!
Blessings,
Kathy


Posted 1 Year Ago


Tate Morgan

1 Year Ago

Thank you Kathy. She was is a Irish girl I once was so in love with. To this day we are best of frie.. read more
Such a beautiful expression of emotion! Very romantic and beautifully written.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

2 Years Ago

Thank you Hannah Hope all is well
This is so wonderfully warming Tate in every way a girl needs to feel touched by a man's deeper truer secret feelings and what an amazing flow to your poetry with perfect rhyming to capture the heart's attention and the mind's imagination and I love that song -- thank you for the thrill! ;)

HUGGS!
Sammi

Posted 2 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

2 Years Ago

Thank you sammi that made me smile
What a truly romantic piece! I'm hanging on each word written..and melting in the process. Simply amazing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

2 Years Ago

Thank you Susan warms the heart to hear that

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Added on August 11, 2009
Last Updated on June 13, 2018
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Tate Morgan

Marion , OH



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