Bottle of Rain

Bottle of Rain

A Poem by Tate Morgan
"

The end of one love is the beginning of another.

"




I've come to bury the last of love

beneath this willow tree

In the deep forest I went

where no one else could see

___________________________

Held within this bottle of rain

are the tears I cried for her

The many nights I couldn't sleep

as I dreamed of how we were

___________________________

I'll place on it no pictures

spin thrice to forget the way

Save in me the pain she flowered

leave the dark for light of day

___________________________

I'll never visit her again

forever play all day in the sun

But night when no one else is there

I'll cry of her as the one

 

Tate





 

© 2018 Tate Morgan


Author's Note

Tate Morgan
Yes Virginia I must have a heart. I think it's broken

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Such quiet and sorrowful pictures you paint. I feel as if I walk through your pain with you and feel the breeze within the willow you buried her under. Such a shattered heart makes everything so quiet, no? Such a strong piece, with the focus of a single journey, as a tear from eye to ground. I weep with you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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you paint such wonderful scenes Tate .. glad i found this one .. wish it were so easy to turn away and never visit "Virginia" again ..its just not that simple .. the night time most definitely comes and pain will run its own course through us eh?! never disappointment on your pages both reading and listening :)
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much Might i add today is David lewis Pagets 70th birthday 3 poems short of a lifetim.. read more
Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

i will have to check that out ... may he do a 1000 more :)
Thanks Tate...i needed that! great piece! music is perfect!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

5 Years Ago

thanks tim I hope it helps what ails you
oh, so bittersweet.. you feel the deep sadness, yet the love that remains.. you have set the tone perfectly and skillfully aided with the music and flow of the piece... very nice..

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

5 Years Ago

Thanks April I guess i have felt this way a few times in life and had to learn to live with these pa.. read more
AprilRN1210

5 Years Ago

yes, they have a way of turning to comfort.. crazy isn't it.. ?
you're welcome..
Tate Morgan

5 Years Ago

smiles yep
worth a second read Tate.....Fine words and a GREAT title too....and once again.....great accompanying song

Posted 5 Years Ago


Dr. Wood ?

5 Years Ago

if you do'''look up @davidregwood....I only joke around and post a few rhymes....no change there the.. read more
Tate Morgan

5 Years Ago

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Dr. Wood ?

5 Years Ago

go on twitter n look me up 4 a [email protected], is my address there
As sad as this poem is, there's tremendous beauty in it. Such a fabulous poem. There's so much inflection underneath the words, I myself felt a bit of heartache for the writer.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

5 Years Ago

Thank you B Thom it is not always easy to pour out a heart to a page
BThomvanWart

5 Years Ago

That's very true. You're welcome.
Awh, made me wanna cry Tate....we never forget the 'one' do we? Touching, yes you have a heart, who knew? haha

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

5 Years Ago

Frieda the one is the person by which we measure all others and find we are wanting thank you.
Frieda P

5 Years Ago

Sigh, so true, and no one else can ever really take their place, so we usually settle for the next .. read more
Tate Morgan

5 Years Ago

thats right and forever will we remember them in the bloom of youth
Love the title!! Good job Tate

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Amazing poem tate thank you for sharing your poems keep up the great work and

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

5 Years Ago

thank you it was a tragedy to write and live
melissa

5 Years Ago

You're welcome
Absolutely stunning, I totally loved your imaginary in you poem and the way your words stirred my emotions inside, your each word was very much heartfelt, brilliant penning and so very much enjoyed xoxo

Posted 5 Years Ago


SheWolfNLust

5 Years Ago

well I am glad you posted it and adored your poem very much, your feelings there I honestly could re.. read more
Tate Morgan

5 Years Ago

thank you i wear my heart on my sleeve
SheWolfNLust

5 Years Ago

I am that way with my writes as well, what ever I am feeling in my heart is in my writes
Man that's powerful, so sad with brillant flow and ryyhm.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

6 Years Ago

Hi keith thank you

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