My Dream

I'll tell you my dream come true. For all of us.

 

 

   I'll tell you my dream.  I want to be in love again. For that love to be my last. I wish to run home to her waiting arms every night make love to her till I can't breath.  Forsaking for her all others feel her sweat pour over me, like a waterfall.  To have the rains wash away my sins baptizing me in tears of joy.  Fall asleep to the beat of her heart, all the while her whispers caress my ears with "I love you". Play on the beach sharing our deepest fears and grandest joys. Wake not knowing where I end, nor where she begins. Drink of her love till I drown. Look at the moon each night I'm away, know she’s doing the same. Close my eyes, feel her heart touch my soul, and know she has shared with me something precious.  Walk hand in hand through the park at 85 stare into each others eyes not seeing the years gone by, but the priceless love within. I want to die in her loving embrace from a life well spent. All the while the lofting sounds of laughter, pour through my window, as grandchildren play hide and seek, in the fallen leaves of changing colors. To the sound of the lonesome whistle down the river the steamers would roll. I dream my last words to be “I love you". The last sounds I hear to be the new life crying down the hall belying echoes of the child that will take my place. A loving tear from my beloved wife and son, I'd pass from this world with a smile.

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Author's Note

It was this story that found my wife for me. For all who ever dared to dream of the great love in life. I thought of this dream and carried it with me all my life. I intend to live it and take it with me to the end. My great great grandfather immigrated to the United States years ago from Ireland. And though I never had the pleasure of knowing him. Be it enough for him to know I am thankful and happy. To him I say "thank you for my life". His spirit lives within my heart!

Reviews

[Caitlynxoxo]

i can honestly say that i have never read anything quite as beautiful as this story. The love, the passion...it was all so heart warming that i found myself blushing while reading it. Your words paint a beautiful picture, Tate. Thanks for sharing

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

Ps- I'm extremely happy that your dream came true :) all the best to you and your loved ones

[realmwriter]

Not bad Tate. Not bad at all. And though your life isn't through, I am sure this dream will come true.

[Tate Morgan]

I wish you were my neighbor

[realmwriter]

Why is that?

[Tate Morgan]

You seem a lot like me and my best friend who was my neighbor died two years ago leaving a hole in my life

[realmwriter]

Ah! Well in that case, I wish I were your neighbor too.

[Tate Morgan]

Ha ha ha yeah we could get out the beam

[realmwriter]

That would be good. I always picture a fine cigar to go with it.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Very touching story... I'm very impressed with your work Tate.
Keep on writing!!!

C. Lee Battaglia

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you c lee this us the only poem I ever wrote that didn't use rhyme and meter

[Woody]

the number of views and reviews is staggering and that only goes to prove what a stunning write this is, Tate. this is breathtaking! what a lucky woman!!

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you it is I who am lucky

[Deborah Brooks-Langford]

wow Tate.... every time I read another one of your poem i think this is the best ever.. and wow this si the best ever!!!!!
Debbie

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Deb this is the only prose poem I ever wrote I am glad you like it Becky did too your thoughts on it are humbling

[ArchaicDreamer]

This is beautiful and made my heart swell. You describe the love so vividly. I hope that you have this love; I think everyone wants this kind of friendship, this kind of devotion and love. Well written. It made tears well up in my eyes. I love your use of language, it adds to the beauty of the piece. It stays in my mind long after I have finished reading the piece.

[Tate Morgan]

thank you K Tate i sent you a friend request Id be honored if youd accept

[ArchaicDreamer]

You're welcome! Of course I will accept, it is a honour to receive your request.

[Mira ThePoetess]

I loved it Tate ... I felt every word and you sure left me with tears in my eyes by the end.
Love is more than a feeling .. if it's shared .. appreciated and above all cherished, it is life's essence. Finding a heart that sees within yours, a hand seeking the comfort in your hand, a whisper of softness in your ear is enough to make the darkness turn into light that completes your personal growth ..... Thank you for sharing .. I sure will vote for this one.

[Tate Morgan]

thank you Mira so nice to hear that today

[wordman]

a beautiful gesture tate I wonder how many people really look back from where there roots are

[Tate Morgan]

Hi man thank you It is this story that found my wife for me and is responsible for my happiness

[wordman]

you are welcome glad you found it tate many are still searching

[Mira ThePoetess]

And many think they've found it but end up crashed upon disappointment ..... knowing they lived an illusion ... Tate .. you are lucky, wishing you all the best.

[melissa]

I agree with everyone thst reviewed this poem it is a beautiful poem

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you it is the only prose poem I ever wrote

[Priya]

thank you...i actually cried :')

[Tate Morgan]

you are welcome I cant say i am sorry to see you cried i hope they were tears of joy

[Baby Ricochet]

Tis a beautiful dream. Different form for you. Prose. I like it. We should write more stories.

[Tate Morgan]

Mark this is the only prose i have ever written.I myself dont like to write this way .I might do another if the winds blow that way thanks