The Roots Of Love

I am the roots, You are the tree.

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"OMG I can't believe you added that picture lol"
Tate's Poem is hanging in the background.

Author's Note

This I wrote to my daughter on her last night as a child.The night before she left for college

Reviews

[RainyDay]

Man, this is gorgeous! So full of loveliness! A resounding awwwh could be heard as the poem ended. What wonderful evoking of emotion-what a way to convey such an over-conveyed feeling!
And as usual your perfect flow and rhyme only helped your message through the minds (and hearts!) of your readers. I don't doubt that I'll return to read this poem again just to feel the beauty of it...

Really, thank you.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

This is beautiful. I have written several for my grown daughter and she adores them.

[Arabdha]

love the collage in the background.."no matter where you choose to be..you will always be a part of me"..my dad is not much of a writer..but he wrote me a letter and gave it to me the day he saw me off..here at my college..the words sure are different..but the content is a lot similar..reminds me of the letter :)

[T. J. Blackburn]

thumbs up x 3

[Tomás Ó C..]

I love the poem... adore it... would you like to submit it to the Feb edition of the journal I run? http://www.cartyspoetryjournal.webs.com

[Treo LeGigeo]

Beautiful. Just beautiful.

[DeViouS]

Ahhh. That is beautiful.

[Stacey]

How beautiful and again WONDERFUL song choice:) Hopes and dreams we hold for our children are actually prayers. Such a warm, tender write for whom you encourage to dream, fly and soar beyond your wildest dreams. How wonderful....a gentle lullaby goodbye!

[The New Girl]

lovely! your daughter is lucky to have a dad like you :)

[Rhonda]

this is an A+++++++++ poem. keep up the great work :)

[EverEmma]

Aww. So sweet! This oozes with love and sweetness!! An extremely beautiful poem, your daughter must be a very lucky girl. This piece is wonderful, special, and perfect for her wedding!!! Hehe

Emma