My Son

How fortunate I am to be the father of this child

Time runs like a river onto the sea.

Author's Note

I can't think of anything sweeter than to have your own child run down the hall screaming Daddies home.

Reviews

[Rory CJ Frankson]

Good looking boy Tate, and your sentiments here are awesome. Who should be jealous of whom my friend, as I wish that I could own that honouring to have a son. To own that experience that has at this time of my life evade me. I least i can be happy for my friend and hope rises through that torch passed on. I wish him well and know he has a firm foundation in which to start having Tate Morgan, as a Father.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Beautiful. Good write with background song. Our love and affection towards our own child is essential for his right growth in the good path. Good and thank u for sharing such a wonderful write.

[light and ashes]

Oh Tate he is such a beautiful child :) This is such a beautiful poem. So wrapped in every word is your love for your son.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This brings tears to my eyes...good tears! You have captured beautiful memories, which are extremely sentimental. I felt the love you have for your son.
Your son is beautiful, I see the foundation of a strong young man. He has a great role model and hero to look up to... Such a wonderful father you are.

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This is sweet! Precious words from a loving dad :)

[joshua deathdealer]

I agree. The structure make it easier to read. The poem itself is beautiful and full of wisdom and yes that is the sweetest thing I've ever heard..Daddies home..(:

[Jadey]

What a sweet daddy.. writing such emotional poems is a fatherly gesture that any child will adore.

[Jaweena...Eileen Quinta..]

Beautiful thoughts expressed! Bringing a child into this world, caring for their needs and teaching them how to take care of themselves is a huge responsibility. Sharing your family values, goals and dreams through daily interactions with your children is life's greatest joy! They teach you so much about life and your aspirations!

[Mary Fioratti]

Such a beautiful poem, Tate.
How many things they can teach us...
Your son is really cute...
*Mary*

[Lori P.]

This brought tears to my eyes. To have a bond with ur son. That is priceless. Makes me stop and listen to the words of a song I have heard so many times.This time I hear the words.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Maybe mommies home. Smile

You have masterfully created a work of art. Your gift of writing and artwork is impeccable.