The Ring

The Ring

A Poem by The ArK
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The Ring, a relic of our love...

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Last night she gave me the ring-
that bore our names,
A reminiscent of the love we once shared,
A shiny ring.

O' dear, why give me back?
Keep it in the deepest pocket of your bag,
or among the last pages of your scrapbook.
But why give me back?

I can't hold it's weight,
cause there's a part of my soul inside-
that I rip apart for you.
A part still craving for your love.

I will dig so deep for this relic,
no nomads can ever find.
I will burn it till it glows,
till the heat of our love melt it.

I will bury it among the woods,
cause love can only be buried among love.
I will give it to nature,
for there's not a better lover than her.

O' dear, you know I can't keep it,
Time must rust it out.
Like our love that once shined,
but left a cold piece of charcoal.

© 2018 The ArK


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Love is such a purest form of feeling, the artists paint with colours, while the writers with words. Yet nobody could ever describe it completely as it differs for every other individual out there.

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is a touching write here, I really enjoyed reading this

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Wow! Touching . whoever she is , I wonder how would someone ignore these kind of love .

Posted 2 Years Ago


The ArK

2 Years Ago

Thank you my friend.
This is a powerful piece of emotion, my friend. I really connected to the emotions behind it. You portrayed what's in your head so very well. Brilliant piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The ArK

2 Years Ago

Thank You!
Returned rings seem to be the ultimate put down to me. I also think, the person it was gifted to should have kept it as a sign of what was once good in the relationship. Breakups are painful, giving rings back just comes across as trying to erase everything. You can't do that. I enjoyed your poem Ark.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


Hey Ark, this was truly a nice write, my friend. Really good the way you expressed your feelings I enjoyed the the read...Peter

Posted 2 Years Ago


The ArK

2 Years Ago

Thank you, peter.
Wonderful write, thanks for sharing ;-]

Posted 2 Years Ago


Fine poem, that has all the hallmarks of classical poetry, with 'O and the subject. Well done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I liked the poem...And the way you expressed your feelings..I loved the third stanza when you said I can't hold its weight cause there is a part of my soul inside...And yes , I agree with you there is no better lover than nature...Loved it...Great work..Keep on writing..

Posted 2 Years Ago


The ArK

2 Years Ago

Thank you Riddhi!
Riddhi

2 Years Ago

You're welcome..

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Added on November 26, 2018
Last Updated on November 26, 2018
Tags: seperation, Love, sad

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The ArK
The ArK

Thrissur, Kerala, India



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