Rain

Rain

A Poem by armin
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This poem is dedicated to rain and defines how rain is important part of our life.

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As leaves make trees wonders,
rain makes our lives wonderful.
As rainbow makes seven colours,
raindrops paint our heart colourful.
Cold raindrops on these hands,
falling from burst of clouds.
Telling to make fun and dance,
on rhythm of thunderclap sounds.
All are one under sky,
that water is our dignity.
With snacks and that cherrypie,
can't stop grooving like infinity.
Because. ......
As breadth gives human life,
rain makes our soul living.
As love is way to heaven,
raindrop is a heavenly feeling.

© 2014 armin


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armin
Having fun with raindrops.

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Poems about the rain are too few.. and yet, except in times of extreme flooding, it's a true gift and beautiful.

The smell of the soil after rain is blissful, the feel of it on the skin more so.. and you've so well expressed that in your first post in the Cafe. Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Hey there Spidey,

I was going over your work and found this. I hope it's yet too late to tell you that this one's well-phrased. And I enjoyed the symbolism and the touching personifications. They make me remember those times I played in the rain. I guess we will always be a kid inside. Every drop seems amusing and each pour is fascinating. Have a nice day! See you around.

Kind regards,
Lavender Soya

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Thankyou so much my friend, by the way lavender is it your real name.
Lavender Soya

9 Years Ago

Hey, No. That's just my pen name. But I'm considering to put my real name on my profile page. :-)
Love your wording!
Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Thanks Emily.
thats so beautiful work and this is very true, rain is one of the most beautiful things, but not when you are at school going home :P walking , like 20 minuits then 40 minuits in bus haha anyways nah its great because we are home hehe. but also the risk is wonderful like walking with your besties wow, crazy thing, memories will always be remembered
once it was raining heavily i was walking into my universtiy lots of people are gazing at the intrance door, i was walking with full confidence when my umbrella broke and i had to run after it, and some of them started laughing i was going to laugh but then decided to follow my umbrealla hahah..
just a small story hehe,
that was nice poem ,:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Thanks suhad, I appreciate that.
I love rain so much and I got hungry with the word cherrypie. :)) Beautiful poem, i like the imagery, thanks for sharing it to us.

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your read olive, have a great day.
Aprille

9 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
sunshine and rain we can`t do without either i liked your picture of rain

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

I appreciate that ,ron.
 wordman

9 Years Ago

you are welcome my friend
Oh my how wonderful Armin. I loved it so. The message is beautiful and I found myself inside of every word. I do so love the rain, walking in it is so wonderful. Such a blessing and such a beautiful writing. You captured me with the first line...As leaves make tree wonders, rain makes life wonderful. How beautiful and the repetition of words, clever, and you go and weave this beautiful story. Thank you so much.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Confuser

9 Years Ago

Thought immediately of Peter Gabriel's song "Big Time." I'm on my way, I'm making it - Big time. I.. read more
armin

9 Years Ago

Really a random thought but I am sure there must a good in that. I'll download the song. Thanks.
Confuser

9 Years Ago

Only if it is free! Look at the younger Peter Gabriel - you'll see the video. It's great too. He .. read more
Enjoyed it ..u gave it a'' fun attire ' 'something that made me smile n i liked especially this part
"As breadth gives human life,
rain makes our soul living.
As love is way to heaven,
raindrop is a heavenly feeling." well done !


Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Thanks, glad you liked it.
A fun little poem. I like the word choice. My favourite lines would be
"With snacks and that cherrypie, 
can't stop grooving like infinity. "
Rain cleanses everything, it rejuvenates our spirits and ......playing with paper boats is fun.. hahaha.

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Thanks dear.
Hello there!

I, while not a huge fan of rain, can appreciate the beauty of it that you're describing in this piece. You mention the idea of playing in the rain and I think that right there is the most wonderful part of it--rain brings out the innocence inside of us. Whenever it rains, I say that the sky is crying--and who it is crying for will remain a mystery--but your last two lines really reminded me of that.

Thank you for sharing this poem, I enjoyed reading it!

~MusicManiac

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your read and review dear.
MusicManiac

9 Years Ago

You're welcome!
I agree. Needed rain is a blessing and can be very dangerous. I liked how you described the rain.
"As love is way to heaven,
raindrop is a heavenly feeling."
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

You are welcome sir. And Thanks again for much love.
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome. It was my pleasure.

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