Just give me a word

Tell me something
break your silence,
make it clear
Do you love me or not?

I want to hear your
sweet whispers in my ear
Don't let it disappear
Do you love me or not?

If your silence means no,
I will melt like the snow
But will find a way to let go
Do you love me or not?
But if your silence means yes,
run fast to my chest,
the restless racing heart of love's quest
Do you love me or not?

I can't read your mind
And I feel lost and blind
Please give a small sign
Do you love me or not?
No, (Please?) don't go astray,
Don't ever be a slave
to unsure feelings
Just tell me straight
if you love me girl,

Tell me something,
break your silence
Just give me a word
Do you love me or not?

Author's Note

Thankyou so much for reading.

Reviews

[Terrence Chang]

It has good rhymes Armin. Love is one thing that makes your senses go wild and want that one word to break free. 'YES'

[annalysiar]

Thank you for sharing. Great emotion and flow.

[Akki]

You poem is so good.
I like your writing style.
You beautifully carved, what you want to say?
I am not sure but I think this is your poem is dedicate or based someone special.
because, your words in your poem indicates that...
anyway, I really like your poem & I making your fan.
Please write awesome poem like this always.
keep writing for us....

[zunie frost]

Wow this is truly amazing !! I love every single line of your poetry !! You got yourself a regular reader now
well done

[Alias]

I know this feeling! So frustrating not knowing if things are going to flourish or fall apart, and one of you just needs to take the leap and ask. This captures the want, frustration, but also the acceptance of that possible 'No' really well.

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

I've learned that if a person hesitates (but there's nothing standing in their way), than most likely they're not in love. When a person truly loves you, he or she doesn't need to think about it. They know it.

[andrew mitchell]

Don't we all want that sign to say everything is all right between two in love! reassurance! A nice fun write

[Aerielle Louise]

Beautiful poem. I love it

[Madison Rose]

Armin, this is a beautiful, and well written poem. I can even see it rewritten as an award winning song.

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome piece my friend :)