On my solid rock

On my solid rock

A Poem by Amila Jay
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A song of tears

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As I lay on my solid rock

With a 1001 of your memories

Locked in between my eyes

And the door you closed behind,

To let in the shadow that took over my life.

 

I’m so tired of seeing your face in my dreams

Slow dancing in my pain

My solid rock won’t let me rest

Until I hear you say

 

My heart is bleeding in your lies

I cannot sleep on my solid rock tonight

Not until I see you weeping for me

When I already know you won’t

 

You confused me too much

To make me blind

So I won’t see the other side

Hidden by the light

 

When fears became tears

It was too late

Why don’t you speak?

Why won’t you cry?

 

Sorry is not the answer

To the wound that will never heal

 

© 2011 Amila Jay


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As I lay on my solid rock

With a 1001 of your memories

Locked in between my eyes

And the door you closed behind,

To let in the shadow that took over my life.



I’m so tired of seeing your face in my dreams

Slow dancing in my pain

My solid rock won’t let me rest

Until I hear you say



My heart is bleeding in your lies

I cannot sleep on my solid rock tonight

Not until I see you weeping for me

When I already know you won’t


very, very, nice here..
lots of great lines.. cool writes..

thanks for shaing, glad i got to read it this night..

:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A straight up expression of emotions... it is never fun when someone toys with your emotions.

Posted 12 Years Ago


aaaaawww... sis Im so feelin this!! you are a great writer!!! your work screams pure emotion and flows so easily!! nice work!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moving write. Excellent pen upon this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well written.Well done.Like the clever internal rhyme, when fears became tears...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes "I'm sorry..." is the only recognition you get...



Posted 12 Years Ago


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Sorry is never a word we truly want to hear! unfortunately it is always proceeded by a deed or action that has caused us pain. This pain, like all the other pains you suffer in this life, will eventually grow dimmer, while you grow stronger.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How sad to see on christmas such a lament.beautiful sadness

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very emotional feelings well put in words. Simple but so powerful. Words arranged wonderfully.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very emotional piece! The pain is felt...so heartbreaking. Great write, Amila!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Amila Jay
Amila Jay

Kandy, Sri Lanka



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