Toothache

Toothache

A Poem by Amila Jay
"

that darn thing

"
 

It starts with a pinch

Right on the cheek

At the joint of the jaw

It stings

Then spread its roots of pain

All across the teeth

Bang shot I keep my hand

Damn it hurts

My body starts to weaken

I think I am going to faint

Biting my tongue hard

Going all the way up to my ear

And clusters in the neck

Some body please give me a pill

© 2012 Amila Jay


Author's Note

Amila Jay
Now how much does it hurt?

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Interesting.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmm. I'm not sure if its how I'm reading this or not, but it seemed a little too hard for me to follow. I enjoyed this, I just think it needs a little tweeking and playing around with to really bring it all together. Keep going, though!



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 3, 2012
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Tags: life, people, situations

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Amila Jay
Amila Jay

Kandy, Sri Lanka



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