Haiku 3

Haiku 3

A Poem by Amila Jay


Birds on a line
swaying to the wind
under a morning chilly sky

© 2012 Amila Jay

Author's Note

Amila Jay
just wrote down what I observed early morning. by the way I'm not really a haiku writer, just trying out this system and there maybe mistakes so just take it easy. your comments are appreciated :))

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Even though not a traditional Haiku, this is really pleasant. I enjoyed it. Keep trying as it's always good to try new things. Especially things you're unfamiliar with.

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is very interesting, I was unaware of Haiku. I love to try out new forms of poetry and I had to look this up. The only thing I could find was that it consists of 3 lines, a five syllable line a 7 and then another 5....There are many forms I trust. Yours does not fit this pattern but is nonetheless beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago

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2 Reviews
Added on June 16, 2012
Last Updated on June 16, 2012
Tags: nature, birds, early, morning, observe, line, sky, chilly


Amila Jay
Amila Jay

Kandy, Sri Lanka

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