Rejection

Rejection

A Chapter by Luna
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Just a random poem. And yes, this has happened to me.

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I tell you how I feel,
You scowl,
Looking at me
Like I'm some impurity.
I turn away,
Tears running down my cheeks,
Cheeks that are red with embarrassment.

You tell me how you feel,
And I remember what you did,
How you turned me down,
And I do the same.
You turn away
And so do I,
Meekly smiling to myself
Because I didn't give you the sympathy
That you never gave me.
Now you know how I felt
When you rejected me.


© 2010 Luna


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i get rejected all the time and now i found the one keep searching dont give up

Posted 14 Years Ago


It doesn't seem random to me. The random poems are the ones where you don't know what inspired them. Excellent poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago


great job! i like the flow. simple and clean:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like how it flows. Simple and to the point. Let me tell you that I know how this feels, but I didn't get the chance to get even. Oh well, but what can one do about it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


showing one how you feel can be better than telling them. Seems so many immune to words. Really good write and expressions.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Luna
Luna

Civil War Capital, VA



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I am a helpless romantic who also loves to attempt to write romance adventure (my novel Maiden Voyage for example) but I tend to try to stick more to poetry. I am southern (yes, I do have an accent) a.. more..

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