Fireside Love

Fireside Love

A Chapter by Luna
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HA! I finally did it! I wrote a rhyming poem though it is kind of a sappy love poem but oh well. I concurred my goal!

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You make me laugh,
You make me smile,
Sit down and stay awhile.

The fire is warm
And it's burning bright.
Your should stick around tonight.

The love I feel 
Is all for you,
I hope you feel the love too.

So stick around,
The time is right,
Keep me warm and in your sight.

Hold me close,
Keep me near,
I need you by my side, my dear.


© 2010 Luna


Author's Note

Luna
I know it is corny and please don't be too hard on it. And I always have issues with titles so if anyone has any suggestions I would be happy to hear them! Thanks!

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I liked it..you do not always have to ryme, but it is ok.. to.
I sometimes prefer not to as it limits my thoughts.. still well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow! You are very talented!
I like your writes alot.
You can keep amazing flow.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Luna... It is very well written and your thoughts and feelings come through clearly. I liked it. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


YAY you reached your goal and you did a good job with it. Love poems are sappy but they are so much fun too aren't they? Nice write

Posted 9 Years Ago



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I am a helpless romantic who also loves to attempt to write romance adventure (my novel Maiden Voyage for example) but I tend to try to stick more to poetry. I am southern (yes, I do have an accent) a.. more..

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