Kiss Me

Kiss Me

A Chapter by Luna

I yearn for you to hold me,
For our breath to become one.
Your lips look so lush
In the full moonlight.
I stare up into your eyes,
Your strong arms wrapped around me,
Supporting me.
I would fall if you didn't hold me,
Your love the support of my life.
I stare at you,
Telling your mind
To kiss me.


© 2010 Luna


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Very good, I really like this one. It's so achingly sweet :) Keep writing, no matter what anyone says. This is amazing

Posted 10 Years Ago


I agree with the others in that the emotion can be felt. I hope the moon always dances for you, my friend. And you always have the support you need.

Yearnings can take a lot from us, yes? And the kiss... I need not say more...

Awesome work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Though it is short the few lines that are given give just the perfect amount of emotion. Perfect in its entirety.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it made my lips ache... wonderful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is such a wonderful write here. I liked this one alot. This is very well written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

To be engulfed by the moon in a luminescent kiss would be most breathtaking for two poetic lovers.
That's a really nice photograph you chose- and it accompanies the verse beautifully.
Great work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Luna
Luna

Civil War Capital, VA



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