Kiss Me

I yearn for you to hold me,
For our breath to become one.
Your lips look so lush
In the full moonlight.
I stare up into your eyes,
Your strong arms wrapped around me,
Supporting me.
I would fall if you didn't hold me,
Your love the support of my life.
I stare at you,
Telling your mind
To kiss me.

Reviews

[A Touch of Insanity:)]

Very good, I really like this one. It's so achingly sweet :) Keep writing, no matter what anyone says. This is amazing

[TamiViolet]

I agree with the others in that the emotion can be felt. I hope the moon always dances for you, my friend. And you always have the support you need.

Yearnings can take a lot from us, yes? And the kiss... I need not say more...

Awesome work!

[AbsentElements]

Though it is short the few lines that are given give just the perfect amount of emotion. Perfect in its entirety.

[JustWantLove]

Beautiful!

[Goddisia]

it made my lips ache... wonderful!

[deeps]

This is such a wonderful write here. I liked this one alot. This is very well written.

[Astrid Hamilton]

To be engulfed by the moon in a luminescent kiss would be most breathtaking for two poetic lovers.
That's a really nice photograph you chose- and it accompanies the verse beautifully.
Great work!