What I Love About You

What I Love About You

A Chapter by Luna

Your smile,
Your eyes,
Your scent,
The feel of your arms around me,
The loving glances you give me during class,
The way that we don't have to talk,
Your lips meeting mine,
Your protection,

© 2010 Luna

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It's how I felt, in love, with a boy in high school.
Sweet sentiment for my Poetry of Love contest.
Good Luck! Thanks for entering.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Short and very sweet. It says a lot in a few short lines.

Posted 10 Years Ago

love it, very simple but i love it

Posted 10 Years Ago

No better way to describe love. Your words are perfect. Those moment when a smile and a soft hand in yours is life. Best days in a life. A excellent poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Sensuous and Kind ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago

short and sweet:) very romantic

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on January 22, 2010
Last Updated on February 1, 2010



Civil War Capital, VA

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