Would you?

If I kissed you

Would you smile?

If I cried

Would you hold me?

If I was in the hospital

Would you hold my hand?

If I were dying

Would you say it will be okay?

If someone was trying to hurt me

Would you stand up for me?

If I frowned 

Would you make me smile?

Reviews

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

I like the simplicity of this, it's a good write =)

[VioletRose]

That was really good and lovely I feel the same way!

[G. Marie"floating on an..]

very sweet like a love song i'd throw a couple of choruses in there and another set of stanzas or two and hey you got a cool love song add some music and ya got a hit just me dreaming................but it does remind me of a start to a love song/that needs to be finished. just my view take it with a grain of salt

[Wicahpi]

sweet

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this is very moving Luna...it requires attention from the reader...perhaps an effort to make you...smile