Would you?

Would you?

A Poem by Luna

If I kissed you
Would you smile?
If I cried
Would you hold me?
If I was in the hospital
Would you hold my hand?
If I were dying
Would you say it will be okay?
If someone was trying to hurt me
Would you stand up for me?
If I frowned 
Would you make me smile?

© 2010 Luna


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I like the simplicity of this, it's a good write =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


That was really good and lovely I feel the same way!

Posted 11 Years Ago


very sweet like a love song i'd throw a couple of choruses in there and another set of stanzas or two and hey you got a cool love song add some music and ya got a hit just me dreaming................but it does remind me of a start to a love song/that needs to be finished. just my view take it with a grain of salt

Posted 11 Years Ago


sweet

Posted 11 Years Ago


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this is very moving Luna...it requires attention from the reader...perhaps an effort to make you...smile

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Luna
Luna

Civil War Capital, VA



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