Last Hope

Last Hope

A Poem by Luna

Just... yah.

The sky grows dark,
My heart grows hard,
I see your face
And I know.
You are 
My only hope,
My final chance,
My last hope.
My luck is gone,
My heart destroyed,
Your dark eyes are
The only thing holding me.
I talk to you,
You shoot me down,
There it goes,
My last hope.

© 2010 Luna

Author's Note

Just.... don't ask...

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I felt in my minds eye the sound of a camera taking a picture,the loud click was heard with the same finality as your last line "My Last Hope." Preserved now and until..

Posted 11 Years Ago

I read this, and loved it. well done

Posted 12 Years Ago

Those moment where life must be decided. Can knock us down and ain't so easy to heal. A powerful short poem. Some question must be asked. We hope for the right answers. A excellent poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago

It's awesome, without that many words to explain what it ment, you can just know what's happening and understand it. You did very good.

Posted 12 Years Ago

very good:)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on August 19, 2010
Last Updated on August 19, 2010



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I am a helpless romantic who also loves to attempt to write romance adventure (my novel Maiden Voyage for example) but I tend to try to stick more to poetry. I am southern (yes, I do have an accent) a.. more..

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