Last Hope

Last Hope

A Poem by Luna
"

Just... yah.

"
The sky grows dark,
My heart grows hard,
I see your face
And I know.
You are 
My only hope,
My final chance,
My last hope.
My luck is gone,
My heart destroyed,
Your dark eyes are
The only thing holding me.
I talk to you,
You shoot me down,
There it goes,
My last hope.

© 2010 Luna


Author's Note

Luna
Just.... don't ask...

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I felt in my minds eye the sound of a camera taking a picture,the loud click was heard with the same finality as your last line "My Last Hope." Preserved now and until..

Posted 10 Years Ago


I read this, and loved it. well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


Those moment where life must be decided. Can knock us down and ain't so easy to heal. A powerful short poem. Some question must be asked. We hope for the right answers. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


It's awesome, without that many words to explain what it ment, you can just know what's happening and understand it. You did very good.

Posted 11 Years Ago


very good:)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on August 19, 2010
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Luna
Luna

Civil War Capital, VA



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