One

This is the freebie out of my new Poetry Book

One

We are all one!

You’ve heard them say.

What’ve you done?

Here to stay!

Do you appear?

In all of their minds!

Or you’re just a tear,

Wiped with their hands!

If all is connected!

Why are we distant?

When we are protected,

Our hearts are resistant!

With all your connections,

What have you done?

Were they only affections,

Which are now gone?

With faith and devotion,

Your path will be found!

With gasp of emotions,

Your soul will be bound!

You prayed in the past,

You prayed for your life!

But prayers will last,

Until you’re alive!

Reviews

[Michael X]

The ending is a diabolical finish! Insightful and well written!

[one sky]

So wonderful and inspiring. Nice rhyming.

Good job!

[Helena]

Hi Artist, long time no see! Beautifully crafted poem, I'm in awe of your rhyming ability. Well done!

Congratulations on your new book!!

[MOON]

Love the way it flows, indeed we are all one. All the best for the book.

[Cliff Rhodes]

I enjoyed reading this and congratulations on publishing your book. It is true, we are all one and learn from each other.

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice work!

[Allison]

you did a really good job! I like how you played with your punctuation and words so it was like a pattern!

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

I loved the pattern of this poem, simple and thoughtful. congrats on publishing your book
:)