Ganga

A Poem by Anshuman Aryav

A hindi poem dedicated to Maa Ganga

Ye ganga paani nahi,

Ye nirmalta ki dhara hai.

Jitna ye humara hai,

Utna hi tumhara hai.

Lakho ki ye rooti hai,

Karoro ka sahara hai,

Ise humne sawaara tha,

Ise humne bigaara hai..

Ye ganga paani nahi,

Ye nirmalta ki dhara hai...

© 2018 Anshuman Aryav

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Jaskaran Singh Sethi

Good one brother.keep up the good work

Posted 5 Years Ago

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much bhai

Akash gaikwad

Anshuman yeh kavita mai badiya message dene ki koshish ki hai tumhne!! Kavita kaafi sidhi or saral hai jo bahot hi aacha hai! Bas ek suggestion hai ki jab tum hindi kavita likh rahe ho toh koshish Karu ki sentence hai se khtam na ho warna tumara har sentence hai se hi end hoga. Or dusra yeh hai ki poem uniqueness Jo hai woh thodi kam hojati hai. Yeh sirf meri soch hai aapko sahi lage toh aacha hai warna aap ignore kar sakte ho!! Thank you!!

Posted 5 Years Ago

5 Years Ago

Ji..mai samajh sakta hu aap kya kahana chah rahe hai, aur apke jagah koi aur bhi hota toh wo bhi yah.. read more

5 Years Ago

Thanks for clarification awesome reply with good inside!!

Bacche ho tum mere...
Tumme mein hi hu behti
Agar hota juban ganga ka...
Woh bhi yahi kehti....
Tis high time to root off all the impurities from India's soul - Ganga!