I Remember

I Remember

A Poem by Vava
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The pain of the memories I hold, The words of love and its deception

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You said to me
That our love ends here
No more no more
Because I no longer want to see you
From now on
Please don't come find me
Because
You aren't the one that I love now

Who has stolen your heart
Who has lied to you for love
Because of this
You act the way you do
Or was it that you just purposely hurt me
To kill me inside
Is that what makes you happy
So don't lie
I'm hurting every second
For my tears can no longer flow

If you don't love me for me
Is it money that you want
Can you not hear my soul call out to yours

Just who do you want
and how perfect can they be
Because it ill's my heart each time I think

I remember your smile
We'd laugh all night
But unlike me
Were you really laughing with your heart

I loved you so much that I didn't know right from wrong
Because I'm gullible to your words
Is that why you couldn't love me
It hurts me so much I can't bare to think of you
I couldn't believe that I loved you so much
So was what you said to me each night a lie
Cause even if you tell me now
my tears have already dried up

But I'd always remember the time when I was in your heart

© 2010 Vava


Author's Note

Vava
If you're going to love a person. Love them for their good as well as their bad. Though sometimes that isn't even good enough

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love how emotion felt the phrases are. Good job but don't let one person break your heart for too long!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Dom
Your writing is so very amazing, man. Your words make the reader almost feel the same pain and emotions that you did. Excellent job again. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Take time to get over the pain of a lost. I like the gentle and kind story. Your description create a vision of sadness for a love that would be missed. I like the last line. A wise person tries to remember the good times and leave the goodbye as a bad memory to fade away. A excellent poem.
Coyote


Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like this, there's a lot of emotion here, and the way you talk about this situation make it seem real, I can alost feel your pain. It's really good. Great write! Keep up the good work! and thank you for sharing!
-Cathrine

Posted 13 Years Ago



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