Mr.Magoose

Mr.Magoose

A Poem by AshlynnA
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Inspired by my 3yr old,Sophie Rose

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Mr.MaGoose the Moose

Mr.Magoose was a moose
He lived beside a goose
Who’s name was Ms. Bruce 
They liked to drink carrot juice 
And eat lettuce that is loose

One day Mr.Magoose the moose 
Told Ms.Bruce the goose
How he loved yellow spruce
Ms.Bruce the goose decided she didn’t like yellow spruce 
This made Mr.Magoose sad and he no longer shared his carrot juice.

Ms.Bruce believed that was just abuse
So Ms.Bruce found a new friend named Ms.Vanhosse
Who liked to drink tomato juice 
And chew on chocolate mousse

Mr.Magoose saw how much fun Ms.Bruce and Ms.Vanhosse were having so he decided
To throw a party in honor of Ms.Bruce the goose.
Mr.Magoose found all Ms.Bruce’s  favorite things…

White Spruce
Tomato Juice
Chocolate Mousse
Carrot Juice

There was no excuse for Ms.Bruce to not make truce with Mr.Magoose.

There was a moose 
and a goose 
who lived with Mrs.Vanhoose

© 2014 AshlynnA


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Absolutely delightful…especially since I'm of an age that I remember both Mr. McGoo and Bullwinkle the Bull in the Rocky Show…I read the entire poem with a smile on my face…
very original and enjoyable…
perfect for a kids book…illustrated of course….
I can't emphasize enough, how that would work…
Great write AshlynnA
llenA

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Fantastic poem, it is definitely something I will read to my nieces and nephews. I love it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M I C K E Y MOOSE !I love a moose !

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Absolutely delightful…especially since I'm of an age that I remember both Mr. McGoo and Bullwinkle the Bull in the Rocky Show…I read the entire poem with a smile on my face…
very original and enjoyable…
perfect for a kids book…illustrated of course….
I can't emphasize enough, how that would work…
Great write AshlynnA
llenA

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i just read this to my son, he thought it was funny

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

feed back is always welcomed


Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on May 28, 2014
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