morals of your mind

morals of your mind

A Poem by ashley patterson
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veiw on a day

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Up all night on medication
Feel so right with meditation
So in touch its concentration
Incents from the gas station
Drinking from a glass mason
Ask around for information
Just don’t avoid the situation
Stop it now no explanation
War will end the population
Nuclear weapon attack by radiation
You need more education
Different kind variation
Go talk to someone communication
Makes you feel better my recommendation
I know this place great organization
They represt the entire nation
They Listen good observation

© 2013 ashley patterson


Author's Note

ashley patterson
ignore the grammar, just my thoughts, let me know what you think? please (:

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So far I like this one the best. I like the detail of "Drinking from a glass mason". I can feel the rhythm of rap in this. Very good. Keep working on the spelling and grammar!

Posted 8 Years Ago


your head sounds like a fun place, good writing

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on May 20, 2013
Last Updated on May 20, 2013
Tags: hippy, calm, drugs, rehab, meditate

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ashley patterson
ashley patterson

middleburg, FL



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im young but experienced. full of anger and peace im a contridiction if youve ever seen one. and im my own person. im a hippy sometimes i rap im a poet and i like sandles and boots. im more.. more..

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