i just cant please you

i just cant please you

A Poem by ashley patterson

how i feel

its like im trapped
i cant do it right
its like im stuck
no use to even fight
no matter how hard i try
i just cant be much in your sight
all my friends say
that your just not tight
but i try and try
with all my might
the end of the day
its a tireless night
in the dark
so much fright
little by little
more than slight
i go out and im in flight
i never saw the moon so bright
i wish i could have stayed at that hieght

© 2013 ashley patterson

Author's Note

ashley patterson
ignore grammer, let me know what you thing please ?(:

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I love how it flows! It sounds great! Keep it up!

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Added on May 20, 2013
Last Updated on May 20, 2013
Tags: feelings, never, good, enough, pity, pary, complain, trying, hard, affort, all, i, have


ashley patterson
ashley patterson

middleburg, FL

im young but experienced. full of anger and peace im a contridiction if youve ever seen one. and im my own person. im a hippy sometimes i rap im a poet and i like sandles and boots. im more.. more..