i just cant please you

how i feel

its like im trapped
i cant do it right
its like im stuck
no use to even fight
no matter how hard i try
i just cant be much in your sight
all my friends say
that your just not tight
but i try and try
with all my might
the end of the day
its a tireless night
in the dark
so much fright
little by little
more than slight
i go out and im in flight
i never saw the moon so bright
i wish i could have stayed at that hieght

Author's Note

ignore grammer, let me know what you thing please ?(:

Reviews

[J.R. Asor_28]

I love how it flows! It sounds great! Keep it up!

[deaths calling]

i liked it