School and College life..

School is past life of learning and college is the gift of past efforts

Life in college is,
just like school days,
with some freedom and liberty,

In school days we have to stay,
in classroom whole day,
Going out of the classroom in recess.,
Felt like getting out the cage of the classroom,

But in college,
we have freedom of going out of class,
And enjoying life according to us.

In past days of learning, we learn,
how is life? what is trending in the world?
And in present days of learning, we learn,
how to apply knowledge in life and create,
our own trend in the world?

In those days we have achieved many friends,
and now we are achieving love at least once,
So that we can understand about love and friendship both,

As for now college life is beyond thinking and imagination,
which engraved our lives with memories of friendship,
and bunking lectures, enjoying birthdays with friends,
taking common off, moving for the ride outside city,
and waiting for someone near the gate,
And so many things....

Amazing things we learn in school is,
what is life? and how to stand in life?
And facts of college life we learned are,
how to utilize our knowledge to make,
it beautiful and amazing,

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

This sounded more like a conversation with someone who asked you what is the difference between school life and college life.

Life in college is,
just like school days,
with some freedom and liberty,

In school days we have to stay,
in classroom whole day,
Going out of the classroom in recess.,
Felt like getting out the cage of the classroom,

But in college,
we have freedom of going out of class,
And enjoying life according to us.

In past days of learning, we learn,
how is life? what is trending in the world?
And in present days of learning, we learn,
how to apply knowledge in life and create,
our own trend in the world?

In those days we have achieved many friends,
and now we are achieving love at least once,
So that we can understand about love and friendship both,

As for now college life is beyond thinking and imagination,
which engraved our lives with memories of friendship,
and bunking lectures, enjoying birthdays with friends,
taking common off, moving for the ride outside city,
and waiting for someone near the gate,
And so many things....

Amazing things we learn in school is,
what is life? and how to stand in life?
And facts of college life we learned are,
how to utilize our knowledge to make,
it beautiful and amazing,

I couldn't edit much but that would do.

[ashish hajagulkar]

thanks my friend for suggestion

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. I am glad you took my suggestion in a positive way. ☺

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Frost taste of freedom and realife. Can bring sweet and bitter. Well wrote poem about your experience. I can just say enjoy

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with the below lines.
"Amazing things we learn in school is,
what is life? and how to stand in life?"
My father told me. Education, education and more education. A good education will ensure no-one will look down at you. Powerful and worthwhile poetry.
Coyote