A Poem by Lily Lover

I thought I was alone in the dark

but then I saw a guy next to small sparks

He seemed to get farther away

but then he looked at me and right then, I knew that was my last day.

© 2008 Lily Lover

Author's Note

Lily Lover
I love Rick Riorda's Percy Jackson series. In book 4, percy and his friends got lost in the Labyrinth, a dark place. That's what inspired me to write this poem.

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The Percy Jackson's series is the best :). I haven't read the fourth book yet but this gives me a good idea of that scene. The flow isn't that smooth but still good job. Keep on writing!

Posted 14 Years Ago

Hey Lily. Good poem. It could be better, because the words don't really flow right. Otherwise it's good. Keep on writing, because that's the way to improve.

By the way, Lily, Welcome to the Cafe!! Keep on writing!

Posted 14 Years Ago

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