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Warm soft air, blowing gently, flowing over our bodies

    like silk

Scent of jasmine perfuming our skin

Laying in the shade of an ancient palm

Entwined with love

 

I feel you softly tickle the inside of my elbow with a feather

While I lightly twirl a lock of your hair round and round my finger

Lazy minutes slide by

Nothing to do

Nowhere to go

 

I feed you a piece of sweet orange

The juice trickles down onto your neck

   Where I lick it off

And you kiss me, so quietly

I taste the orange on your soft lips

 

We look at each other

   And see adoration

You take me by my hand

Tenderly lifting me to my feet

Hand in hand

In perfect harmony

We go into our home

Together

Reviews

[Scott Metro]

GULP...some hot passion without the usual passionate wording.
Excellent images spring forth..
Very nice.
Scotty Wolf.

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Don't tell me I just made the wolf gulp! Thank you Scotty.

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scotty....

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:) ............. Star

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Wonderful, romantic and quite sensual. Exquisitely, flawlessly penned with very rich imagery. Bravo!

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Why thank you so very much!

[Gleb Zavlanov]

It was my pleasure. :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

This is wonderful, Star. It's so romantic...those scenes showing how a loving couple find the perfect moment of harmony and tenderness in each others' arms.

Just so sweet and lovely. Keep it up! =)

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Thanks Dhaye. All imaginary for me ... but satisfying non the less!