Dream

Dream

A Poem by svarevska.anastasija

What are dreams and are they real?
How do we about them feel?
Somebody wants a dog for birthday
Somebody wants to meet true love
Somebody just wants not to starve

Somebody wants to be a writer
Somebody wants to weigh bit lighter
Somebody hopes to pass a test
Somebody wants to have some rest

Somebody wants to win at sports
Somebody wants to buy new shorts
Somebody wants to fly as bird
Somebody wants to find right word

We all are humans, we live by scheme
And our dream just stays our dream

© 2015 svarevska.anastasija


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Really. You are telling the truth abouy dreams. Dreams continue appearing in our heart till our death. Humans are surrounded by a variety of dreams just as you say that someone wants to be a writer , some want to get true love and so on . All people go on dreaming of getting new and new things. I really like your lovely poem for the reason that it has simple language and you have used rhyming words as your stylistic device . But one thing, you haven't specified your own dream . What is it ?

Posted 8 Years Ago


really did enjoy reading this poem.. but our dreams should be made real yes? I feel bad for those whose dreams end whenever they wake up

Posted 8 Years Ago


Human wants are unlimited and our ways to satisfy them are limited. I learnt this in my Economics class,yet to find the same meaning in literature is quite something! Good work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


svarevska.anastasija

8 Years Ago

I totally agree with you! Thanks!
Paavana Varma

8 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Hi Anastasija, what I like is that you mix very simple wishes with very ambitious dreams and aspirations. What exactly do you mean by 'we live by scheme' ? Do you mean that society determines our dreams.

Well done. Could you read some of mine ?

Posted 8 Years Ago


svarevska.anastasija

8 Years Ago

It was my idea :) thank you!
by "live by scheme" I meant that the majority of us live accordi.. read more
Everybody wants something!
Nice write! 😊

Posted 8 Years Ago


svarevska.anastasija

8 Years Ago

that is exactly what I wanted to say! thanks!


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Added on October 4, 2015
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