Gravity Plays

When you find yourself wanting to be with someone but knowing instantly that it's something that's never gonna happen..

I feel you, It gets stronger,

Each step I keep forward..
I try,But you hold me back,

It throws me off track!

But I admit,

I like it being like that..
So, I come closer,

To see if you can hold me forever..
But you disappoint,

And let me off for a second..

A second that feels like a year..,

A year that's too long for me to bear.!
The closer I come,the stronger you get,

The gravity plays,till i regret!

You are my gravity,

You keep my sanity..

I watch you walk away,

From something you can't re-play..,

That moment gone,

When you're far away..
Something new born,

When you walk past my way..
And when i look down,

I feel like there's no ground beneath..

And when I try to feel,

I feel nothing,

It's like you're gone forever,

It gets frightening,

Thinking about you, i fret..

But gravity plays,till i regret!!

Author's Note

Like always,played with the words a little bit..
And sometimes not every poem has an happy ending! ;)

Please feel free to leave your reviews and suggestions ! :)

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

Yes, I think we can all find this relatable in some way Aswin, The nervous feel in the pit of your stomach warning you too soon that it will not play out how we hope and want so dearly for it too, as we see ourselves drifting just inches out of reach, before we know it the gap has been consumed by the horizon and all we are left with is a tortured memory of what might have been.
I like this as much for the difference of pace and style I have seen in the few writes of yours I have read. Look forward to reading more.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Glad you liked it.. I always try to keep the element of freshness in each of my writes! :)
I'll try my best.. Thank you.. really appreciate it ! :)

[Elle Alley]

I love it! Amazing writing, and an amazing way to express such a strong feeling.

[Aswin R Prasad]

I was reviewing your writing when you were reviewing mine! :D
Thanks .. Glad you liked it

[Blackheart]

Beautiful. So much to think about. Comparing gravity with the love someone has for you is so much fascinating. Good job. :)
In the 27th line, I think is you're instead of your.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thanks for your review! Glad you liked it..
And thanks for pointing out the error..I didn't even notice that! i'll change that now! :)

[Blackheart]

You're welcome bro. You're doing good, keep writing more. :)

[Tom27]

This would make a good lyric to a song. Be it jazz, rnb or rock. On its own, beautifully written and stylized to express. Keep it up

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much.. I really appreciate it! :)