No One Like You

The fear of losing a person who's drifting away

You could even see through my eyes, 

through my mind and through my soul 

when no one else knows What is left untold.. 

 Still, I was never ever satisfied, 

 Living a lie and living a while.. 

 When I already knew the fire's gonna die.. 

And dying out.. Even though we fought.. 

Commin back each time And for cryin out loud 

It just was a fragile line 

 A line that we broke, 

 Till I was lost in the colours of your cold. 

 The warmth I never saw was a place I wanna know. 

 Greys fields , the maze shields Trapped within but I could still feel.. 

Feel everything but it felt surreal.. 

Only before you I ll ever kneel. 

 No one like you, And the only truth I knew 

Was that nobody could replace you 

You were the truth you were the root.. 

The cause,my muse The only one I didn't wanna lose. 

 No one like you.. 

And to find someone better than you when I'm lost in.. 

In you.. Your depth that crept upon me without the slightest of notice.. 

the depth from which I can't get out when I'm trying my hardest. 

I fall back, into the same dark depth.. 

Darkness that your light couldn't clear.. 

Your light.. You.. Driftin away, far.. 

And the only fear was "will the light disappear.? ".. 

 No one like you.. No one like you..

Author's Note

After a long time. Penned down something I thought was worth uploading. 😉

Reviews

[Ruth]

Some amazing lines and visuals here Aswin...the quality of soul seeking in love is palpable and yet the self still wanders and wonders their own journey at times...brings bonds and connections into a new light...beautiful...

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words and thoughts.
"No one like you.. No one like you.."
I like the above lines and when someone make our heart dance and sing. We are lucky. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Darknessmymuse.]

A very intriguing piece. The usage of words was really good. I loved the line "Till I was lost in the colours of your cold.
The warmth I never saw
was a place I wanna know." Amazing.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much. :)

[zaisham9393]

I think it's amazing :)!.Thank you for sharing :)!

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you :) Really appreciate it.