Carefree.

Carefree.

A Poem by AIMEE

Wish on a star. Or the sun?
I want to capture the moment.
Freeze before I start
Worrying,
 Rays of sun reach through the window pane
Painting golden shimmers of sun, playing with my golden strands of hair, mixed in with all the brown. 
My eyes light up. 
As though the morning were waking all of me to a hidden, but breathless adventure. 

© 2011 AIMEE


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Love this! Makes me feel carefree. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful, I feel this piece, if that makes sense :) As steel said, very nice awakening. I also love your words, :) Keep writing like this :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



Awakenings such as these are truly grand...what a bright, expressive way to describe them.

Nice...

Steel

Posted 13 Years Ago



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