spring rain

spring rain

A Poem by jaye river

how nostalgic the spring rain

still wets the leaves of grass all the same

fifteen years passed and now i see

the soil nourishes from underneath

© 2024 jaye river


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

I've never thought of rain as nostalgic...a thing with memory and desire. But I like the personification in this piece. Yes, our roots as people are also where we find our nourishment; from family ties that bind to history that gives life direction and existence meaning. I enjoyed this poem. F.

Posted 1 Week Ago


jaye river

1 Week Ago

thank you for your kind words and insight
Beautiful brevity. We learn so much by looking at nature. So many lessons to be learned. I love this piece.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


jaye river

1 Week Ago

thank you, Chris. always means a lot to me when you enjoy something i write
Chris Shaw

6 Days Ago

You are most welcome.
as we mature, we understand more and more about life...
and nature is a great teacher.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

68 Views
3 Reviews
Added on June 5, 2024
Last Updated on June 6, 2024

Author

jaye river
jaye river

About
hello, i'm hoping to make friends and get feedback on my poetry. i'm 25 years old. feel free to say hi! i'm t.s. eliot's biggest fan more..

Writing
seraphim seraphim

A Poem by jaye river