Love, Shadow

Love, Shadow

A Poem by Auby Faith Evans

Today is black day,
darker than the color,
I tried to draw out a shadow,
of somebody I used to love.

But there is no one here,
there is not a single soul,
so i let my imaginations go,
joined into the blindness.

Time keeps on running,
everything else seems paralyzed,
still, i see the particles,
creeping out the front door,
leaving small traces behind,
of dreams and hopes.

You were the light that gives me shadow,
You were the night that promises and gives me tomorrow.

© 2017 Auby Faith Evans


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I like the artwork. Gave strength to the words.
"creeping out the front door,
leaving small traces behind,
of dreams and hopes"
I like how you used the light and the shadow. A realistic view of thoughts and memory. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


"You were the light that gives me shadow,
You were the night that promises and gives me tomorrow."

these lines are so damn powerful..
It's quite sad to read the melancholy and lost phase, but your words are unique and immortal..
Thanks for sharing..loved it sincerely

Posted 9 Years Ago


Evocative, stirring. There are some memorable verses here. The images you force us to witness are surreal, and vivid. I could feel the the sad energy creeping into my bones.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is haunting work. It gave me chills. Time stopped for me as I read along and I felt as if I was trapped in limbo somewhere in another dimension. It was like standing in the shadow of fear, feeling it's weight bearing down on me. These are some heavy emotions that you've penned. I was swept away.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Auby Faith Evans

11 Years Ago

indeed, i wrote this with heavy emotions. thank u for sharing ur thoughts on this one

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Added on October 7, 2012
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Auby Faith Evans
Auby Faith Evans

Volgograd, Russia



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I write poems occasionally. I love nature as my inspirations. Sometimes i write based on experiences and sometimes its just my imaginations. Currently living in a foreign country, Russian Federation .. more..

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