feeling

feeling

A Poem by Audrie

Can you tell me how to feel?


I need to know if I’m for real~


When I'm left to my own devices~


flaming desires become raging fires~


You’ve hurt me so~


my heart has no glow~


You crushed my dreams and desires~


I should have known you were a liar~


I can’t believe what you would do~


to make my world feel so blue~

© 2010 Audrie


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Pain can blind us from the good around us. I like the concept of asking what must we do when we are in pain to the abuser of our heart. A very strong poem. A short poem and to the point. I like the ending. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Audrie
Audrie

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