My Reality

I was thinking about this while listening to music and it came to me like a natural flow of thoughts and creativity. Review me please.

Time to split back from the game

the world is in the pits

All I do is run with fame

while my eyes is just two slits

 

The world is spinning in place

but I'm just falling out

Then people fly to space

But the planet is in a drought

 

Then life turns around quickly

and my memories of infamy

so the person I hold close

found me in the  symphony

 

I stood and smiled for eternity

while her eyes would scream

The three words of infinity

"I love you like a dream"

 

I flew to the heavens

and soared through the wind

I finally was driven

but the people weren't kinned

Reviews

[Shadowed_pilgrim]

Nice, well written. The dialogue used was well added. Good ending, it snaps the reader back to the 'Reality' of what the person is experiencing, good job :)