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Entry 3: 2 - 28 - 12

Entry 3: 2 - 28 - 12

A Chapter by A. L. Allen

Dear Journal,                                  2 �" 28 - 12

          My heart is pounding in my chest and I can’t keep the smile off my face as I write this. A new boy just moved to our school, and he is the cutest boy I have ever seen! Ahh!!!!! I’m about to die!!! J His name is Jayce. I know that I’ve known him for less than 24 hours, but I think he would make the perfect husband.   

I know, I know, you’re probably thinking “Slow down there Taylor! Marriage is importamt; you can’t just rush into these types of things.” Or, you could be thinking “Just wait, Taylor. In the next few years your view on boys will be much different.” Well, before you start freaking out on me, let me just tell you not to worry; I’m not actually looking to marry this guy. He just has a lot of qualities that I’d like to see in my future husband.

For instance, he’s very attractive. I know that’s a very shallow thing to say, but honestly, who wants an ugly husband? No girl out there dreams of one day marrying somebody who’s short, fat, balding, and has a

big wart on his face. Of course, you don’t judge people because of their looks. Many a girl have fallen in love with someone that was- to put it kindly �"less than attractive, and I think that’s great! But, I doubt that

any girl would say “When I grow up, I want to marry someone that’s ugly.”

          Okay, sorry, I got a little side-tracked there. Anyways, this new boy has gorgeous dark hair, stunning blue eyes, and is overall just extremely attractive. He would definitely fit the criteria for “tall,

dark, and handsome”.

          Another quality that he has that I would look for in a future

husband is that he’s very sweet. He’s polite, has the most sincere smile, and he genuinely waves and says hello to just about everyone he passes in the halls. Better still, when I talk to him, he makes me feel

important and of worth. He doesn’t make me feel like a nobody, which is what all the other boys at school do.

          He’s also super funny. I can’t quite remember all of the things he said, but I swear, I was cracking up every time he opened his mouth!

          An added bonus is that he’s musical. Not in the “yeah, I can sing a tune decently” kind of way; but in the “I’m extremely talented and I don’t mean to be” kind of way. My heart melts when he sings in choir, and after class was over I heard him playing the piano. It was unbelievable!

          So, basically, this guy is my perfect boy that has absolutely everything going for him. I’m sure that when I’m older, I’ll be looking for guys that are good with kids, trustworthy and dependable, and hard workers that can provide for a family. But, for now, I am completely content with my new crush. J

          Gosh! My heart just starts fluttering every time I think about him! (Sigh)

 

          ~Taylor 


© 2012 A. L. Allen


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Brilliant humour on the first line I loved that! I even love 'who wants an ugly husband?' The best entry so far! You put some action in the hallways. Variation - how about in class or outside? P.E? 100 though! Great to read

Posted 11 Years Ago


lol......taylor is so funny I love her!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


lol! Sounds like my friend XD

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lool this is liike when I saw the guy of my dreams and I wwas spazzing over him every second of the day. Nice to know that Taylor's brightened up! Tayloor seeems lik a cute kawaii like character with qualities that vary depending on her mood. And what was the other book you wanted me to read? Anyway, I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can't wait to finish this. I really like taylor. And you know what? She kind of reminds me alot of me. I love it, Ally.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awww, that was nice. So cute. ^-^ Loved this chapter. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aw, this is cute. There is so much excitement in your words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


LOLOLOLOLOLOL this was so funny! :) An interesting change to the last two entries- but every person has their ups and downs. ;) *reads next chapter*

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm going to repeat myself. "Forever Alone."
This was still such a cute entry. I'm sure everyone has their moments..



Posted 12 Years Ago


Haha I can totally relate with Taylor in this chapter!
Awsome work with how you capture everything in such few words!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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