To Be Her

So I took the haiku format lesson from a professor off of Def Poetry and used my own words....may it work? I am still practicing....

 

So, You want Me to love Her

 

like You Should Be loving her

 

Who's really her mother?

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Short and pithy! Great poem.

Sal

[Mysty Rayn]

This is so powerful. You did a wonderful job. I'm so impressed by this. You really blew me away.